Please
give me back my eyes? so
I can fly striaght like an arrow
towards my destiny
from the Archer, I...
Busy.
Lonely.
Silence.
Gripping.
Raw.
Truthful.
Exposed an explosion of thoughts and emotions, revealed
times like these, i will shield.
no
I will yield to the after-thoughts
than the present
ones
and unwrap the presence,
an energy so lethal
but without it
would be detrimental to our survival.
Life,
you are a beautiful
so unseemly you teach.
peeling each layers,
unwillingly at times
and none, can claim it as a breach of contract
or privacy.
... am falling without wings
allowing the wind of invisible unclaimed words
to draw me in at such speed unimaginable,
stop.
(I have) got this, this one, caught in the palm of my hand,
the Author.
Bulleye!
Shaun Gordon aka Donusho
29/09/2010 ©
wow - another great poem ...i could quote the whole poem but my fav lines are...so unseemly you teach.
ReplyDeletepeeling each layers,unwillingly at times..
Hi Claudia, extremely flattered that you could quote this whole poem (BIG SMILE), thank you very much for your kind words.
ReplyDeleteYour poems are always so full of emotion. Love it!
ReplyDeletethank you very much Alee sending you big hugs!
ReplyDeleteVery powerful.. I notice you have a very unique style of doing them!! Love it.. xox
ReplyDeletepowerful,
ReplyDeletelovely word flow,
Welcome to our potluck party by linking in a poem, old one works well. Thanks!
ReplyDeletehttp://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-seven-deadly-sins.html
hope to see you in,
we are closing within 12 hours,
share an old poem,
love your open mind and precious talent in poetry.
@jingles, thanks, throughout all my poetry i try to be open and expressive of what i feel or think at any given time, i am glad you appreciate this (big smile), see on pot luck soon!!
ReplyDelete@Olivia, i am glad you like my style... i was told the other day that i am misunderstood in terms of writing etc... still trying to understand that statement though, hmmmm - i will continue to be myself.