Your words don't matter
any more to me
Your words will fade
into the abyss
and rots there,
where it belongs.
I am not angry,
rather calm and collective
your audacity wants me
to react like someone
who has epilepsy.
Your vocabulary and sound
can not be mixed
like oil and water.
so,
drip off my Goretex jacket
Bribe and Confusion.
My ear waxs detects your manipulation
interrogation
condemnation
judgemental spat
mood swing song's
and above all
Hypocrisies.
I have no burden strapped
because it was packed
and sent away to Disney land
as though it never existed.
Your music has vanished
because i broke the vinyl's,
Sounds of a broken record
reminded me of a spoilt child.
The last straw, a crumpled, half torn photo of you.
Memory lane can remain a stain,
washed out with bleach,
forgotten.
so dont you ever come near me
and preach!
Damn blood sucking leech!
Shaun Gordon aka Donusho 5/9/2010 ©
loud and clear,
ReplyDeletewow,
powerful force of words.
lovely done!
tight! love the earwax verse...ha and resonding like someone has epilepsy...wow. break that vinyl...love the emotion in this one. nice one shot!
ReplyDeleteStrong, heartfelt words here. How often have my thoughts and emotions taken me to this place? Boldly written and expressed.
ReplyDeleteI remember this tearing up photos and throwing things away....it helps...but time is the biggest helper of all. you express the feelings well here.....bkm
ReplyDeleteVery strong and raw feeling... Interesting verse.. I like it. Thanks for sharing..
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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I read this one earlier and have had commented on it.. is it reposted or you have posted the same on this site too....?
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Connect with me on Twitter at @VerseEveryDay to read one verse everyday on life, love and longing...
hi donusho....very late on my reading but well worth the wait....what a strong poem full of angst that finished in a enraged finale....great poem..cheers pete
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for your charming comments. I am glad you can not only relate to it but also feel the emotion behind the words written.
ReplyDeleteFor me the challenge at some parts were to resist cursing! As i relived to moment in my mind and realising it doesnt hurt anymore - Great!
But i love life, she is an unseemly teacher at times... oh and you are so right Signed BKM, time is a healer.