Wednesday 15 September 2010

Rose's

Rose's

I saw these roses
and thought of you
It looked so electrifying
and so warm with love.

Never hide your light,
bravely smile
and let it shine
even in the rain.

Let no pain
take you off
your life's goals or dreams,
focus!

Let your thorns
protect you from
every forbidden hand
only allow whats right
to handle you.

Though your strong
you are still tender loving Lady
that needs to be handled
in a Gentleman's way.

And on that Day of his Arrival
only then your thorns will soften
and you will exhale fresh perfume.

A love that only
both of you consume,
flourish and bloom,
so believe these Roses
represents
you.
x



Shaun Gordon aka Donusho 26/8/2010 ©

Note: Another old poem of mine I found.

7 comments:

  1. Beautiful Shaun...delicate and filled with the wisdom of a gentleman....bkm

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  2. This such a great simile and lovely piece of advice...

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  3. Thank you signed...bkm and Dulce for your comments, much appreciated.

    This poem was written for a young friend of mine who was seeking love... in all the wrong places!

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  4. What a refreshingly beautiful poem. Looking forward to reading more from you.

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  5. @ yagirlnext door, Thank you for your comment, much appreciated. :)

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  6. well put.
    love the rose image in your word painting!

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  7. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/09/21/4ever-friends-thursday-poets-rally-week-29/

    two awards for you.

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